Monday, January 9, 2012

Microfiction: So You Think You Can Dance?

Welcome to today's microfiction!  

Grandma's Goulash graciously hosts Succinctly Yours, the wonderful meme for those of us addicted to microfiction. The trick is to write a story in 140 characters or less using the photo below as inspiration. To add to the challenge is the word of the week, "drift."  My stories are below.




 
Dancing Rule
(136 characters)

Chef training at the Hokey Pokey CafĂ© entails putting one’s right foot in and shaking it all around, because that’s what it’s all about.

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Dancing Fool
(137 characters)

Poor Jim was destined to drift from job to job. He just couldn’t understand why he got fired every time a boss told him to “shake a leg.”


To read the microfiction stories of others participating in this meme, please click HERE.

Thanks for visiting! See you on Wednesday for the naked truth about . . .The Whoosh Zone.

Have a great week!
Lisa

17 comments:

Sioux said...

The Hokey Pokey Cafe? You folks in the south must put a little something special in your coffee ;)

Entertaining, as usual.

Linda O'Connell said...

Lisa, your mind never stops coming up with FUNNY.

Sandra Davies said...

Hokey-coking cooks - love it!

Akelamalu said...

Loved them both Lisa, especially the first one! LOL

SparkleFarkle said...

I'm not surprised in the least that, once again, you are my Succinctly Yours hero! *motions to assistant (Yes, I have an assistant. Doesn't everyone???) to hand over yummy SY trophy, then prestigiously delivers it to Miss Lisa* CONGRATULATIONS! Enjoy your PRIZE! (Not too worry. No meatballs were captured, kicked and coated during the making of this award.)

SparkleFarkle said...

P.S. Or were they??? Muah ha ha ha ha!

anthonynorth said...

Enjoyed both but the first was classic :-)

Pat said...

I love them both and I'm still laughing. You and Grandma are co-Queens of Succinctly Yours today.

When I sub in kindergarten, the HP is always my favorite dance...we all get really goofy and the kids just crack up.

Extremely literal people--gotta love 'em.

Karen Lange said...

Love these! Great job, Lisa! :)

Helen said...

Ha ha both of those were funny! ^_^

Jules said...

LOL, he could also be doing the Monster Mash potato. :)
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow

Grandma's Goulash said...

"Shake a leg" had me ROFL. Bosses are so hard to please. lol

Pooch said...

I do hope Jim shakes his way over to the Hokey Pokey Cafe. He's a natural for their staff!

Very funny!

:)

Lynn said...

OMG you are the best! As always! LOVE these. Cracking me up.

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Thank you, everyone. Your lovely comments keep me microfiction-ing. :)

Sonia Lal said...

Aww poor Jim!

Tammy said...

I'm sorry I got to this so late in the week, because it would have made my day Monday. That leg wasn't all that shook. When I laugh with my hand on the mouse, the whole screen shakes!